Kindly provide reviews for my GitHub Profile README

[deepansharya1111]

Hi everyone 👋 I recently made some changes to my Profile's README file, please provide your views or suggestions on it.
If you like it or if I can improve something?
The changes I've made are somewhat different from normal profiles so I'm curious to know your views.
Please ignore the low green squares and contribution count: 😅 I have just started.
Here's my profile link: https://github.com/deepansharya1111

[schmelto]

Moved to #1923

[eddiejaoude]

Thanks 👍