写小作文的第一信念:
给谁写?:上级还是平辈认识还是不认识去信还是回信
设定:上级不一定不认识,平辈不一定就认识
第一段,四行之内。 称呼 .问候).表达情绪_(熟人)/介绍自己(陌生人)说明目的(题目要求的呈现)
Dear Professor Cook,
Welcome to China, and I hope you are doing great! I am LiMing, one of your future students in China. The main purpose ofthis letter is to make some recommendations to you about thetourist attractions in Changsha.
a. 问候
平辈:Hows everything going?
长辈: I hope you are doing great!
万能(新):I hope this message fnds you well!
特别欢迎:Welcome to China!
也可连用:Welcome to China, and I hope you are doing great!
对方有喜:Hows everything going? Congratulations on your.
b. 表达情绪(熟人)
回信设定:I was delighted to receive your letter, in whichyou mentioned that you would...或:I am so grateful to you for inviting me to attend your....
2.得知喜讯: I felt thrilled to know that you had beensuccessfully..(eg: admitted to your dream school). Congratulations!或:I felt thrilled when I heard you were doing/you would do sth.
3.回复询问:I felt very happy to receive your inquiry about...或:I felt delighted to know that you are interested in ourprogramme.
1、“我是有组织的人”
I am(不要说My name is) Li Ming, the coordinator of the upcominggraduation ceremony of our university/the Aiding Rural PrimarySchool project of our school/the upcoming international student trip.
I am Li Ming, the president of the students'union of our university/the head of the English association of our school.
I am Ming Li, one of the volunteers in the Hope Project Associationof our university.
Unfortunately不好意思
..目的句
I am writing this letter to../The mainpurpose of this letter is to....
make some suggestions/recommendations about...
introduce to you sth we/I will do...
cordially invite you to join in sth/to be the judge of..
discuss with you my initial thoughts on..
cancel our meeting. Please allow me to explain the reasons.
report to you the progress of my preparations.
share with you my experience in ./ideas on sth.
make a complaint about an unpleasant shopping experience.
Make some suggestions-give you advice
目的句有的时候有两句并列:
可能a: 我要做什么,所以我要你做什么
I will do….., and I would like to invite you to…
可能b:根据题意,小作文的目的有两个
The main purposes of this letter are to…, and to…
具体设定:开头和中心句间的丝滑过渡
a.我校将举办,我想邀请你
“你好,我是学生会主席,我我校将举办某某活动,因此我想邀请你参加。。。“你好,好久不见,很高兴你高考考上理想的大学,因此这个假期我想建议你如何学英语。
Our school is going to holda_活动名invite you to participate.so I am writing this email to cordially
b.来信你问我,所以我告你
“你好,欢迎你来到中国,为了你更好地了解我们的城市,我想给你建议几个景点。“你好,我负责该项目,很高兴收到你的来信表示对我们的项目感兴趣,我给你介绍一下。
I am delighted to know that you are interested in_, so I am writing.
I am delighted to receive your letter inquiring about_, so I am writing to….
In your letter, you expressed that …, so I am writing to provide my idea.
c.看到贴征集,我来给建议
“你好,我本校太二学生,看到网站上正征集对食堂的建议,我写信来提出一些我的看法。
I happened to see the post on the campus website collecting ideas about…., so l am writing to make some suggestions.
d.你刚来中国,我想帮助你
“你好,欢迎你来到中国,为了你更好地了解我们的城市,我想给你建议几个景点。 “你好,我负责该项目,很高兴收到你的来信表示对我们的项目感兴趣,我给你介绍一下。 “你好,我本校大二学生,看到网站上正征集对食堂的建议,我写信来提出一些我的看法。
一、书信格式:
1、写给机构:Dear Sir or Madam,(06、07、12-2)To Whom lt May Concern,(致有关人士)2、写给个人:Dear +人名
1)题目有人名:抄:Dear Mr. Wang, Dear Bob,
2)题目无人名:编:Dear Neo,Dear Mr.President,
3、写给集体:1)12-1:Dear Friends,
2)13-2:Dear Fellow Classmates
二、书信正文:3段,7句,100-130词,3-5个关联词,3-5个从句
1、第一段:1-2句1)自我介绍:私人书信除外(1)工作人员:
A. 05:l am a staff member of your company.
B.06: l am a staff member of Huawei (China) Electronics Ltd.
(2)学生:
A.07:l am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduate in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of PekingUniversity.
B.12英语(-):l am the president of the Students’ Union of Beijing ForeignStudies University.
2)写作目的:书信中心思想,改写提纲-
(1)l am writing the letter for purpose of expressing my sincere apology toyou.(道歉信)
(2)l am writing the letter to give/propose/offer some/severaluseful/conducive/practical suggestions/proposals/recommendations toyou.(建议信)
(3)l am writing the letter to recommend my favorite movie/book to you.(推荐信)
2、第二段:3句左右,改写提纲二
1)主题句:1句
2)分论点一:1句
三、书信落款:
1、结尾客套:
1)万能:Yours sincerely,或Sincerely yours
2)私人:Yours faithfully,或Faithfully yours
3)公务:Yours truly,或Truly yours,
2、签名:Li Ming或Zhang Wei
3)分论点二:1句
1.建议信:suggest--advice , suggestion , proposal , opinion/idea2.感谢信:thank- thanks , gratitude , appreciation
3.投诉信:complain-complaint , dissatisfaction , indignation4.推荐信:recommend/introduce-recommendation ,introduction
5.邀请信: invite- cordial invitation
6.道歉信: apology- apology ,regret ,sorry
7.求职信:apply for- position, qualified candidate, submit
8.询问信:inquire - ask for , wonder, inquiry
9.辞职信:resign- quit , leave ,resignation
10.申请信:applyfor- application,want to
11.倡议信:advocate - On behalfof..., encourage , inspire , call for
12.祝贺信:congratulate- congratulation
13.拒绝信:decline-cannot accept, resign
14.慰问信:sorry to hear
15.答复函:In response to your last letter