From a930a107356f69bc767cdcd5a771c4e337d245a5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Tom=C3=A1=C5=A1=20Ba=C5=BEant?= Date: Tue, 6 Jun 2023 15:54:34 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Last minute style changes --- xml/vt_scenarios.xml | 2 +- xml/vt_tools.xml | 10 +++++----- xml/xen_administrating.xml | 14 +++++++------- xml/xen_host_network.xml | 2 +- xml/xen_xenstore.xml | 4 ++-- xml/xen_xmtoxl.xml | 4 ++-- 6 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/xml/vt_scenarios.xml b/xml/vt_scenarios.xml index c18f43ecd3..75f1849132 100644 --- a/xml/vt_scenarios.xml +++ b/xml/vt_scenarios.xml @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ - Faster and agile virtual machine provisioning. + Faster and agile virtual machine provisioning diff --git a/xml/vt_tools.xml b/xml/vt_tools.xml index 50b135e7fd..827caddbb8 100644 --- a/xml/vt_tools.xml +++ b/xml/vt_tools.xml @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ - With &libvirt; you can also manage your &vmguest;s remotely. It + With &libvirt;, you can also manage your &vmguest;s remotely. It supports TLS encryption, x509 certificates and authentication with SASL. This enables managing &vmhost;s centrally from a single workstation, alleviating the need to access each &vmhost; individually. @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Virtualization console tools - &libvirt; includes several command line utilities to manage virtual + &libvirt; includes several command-line utilities to manage virtual machines. The most important ones are: @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ virsh (Package: libvirt-client) - A command line tool to manage &vmguest;s with similar functionality + A command-line tool to manage &vmguest;s with similar functionality as the &vmm;. &virsh; allows you to change a &vmguest;'s status, set up new guests and devices, or edit existing configurations. virsh is also useful to script &vmguest; @@ -82,10 +82,10 @@ virsh # hostname virt-install (Package: virt-install) - A command line tool for creating new &vmguest;s using the &libvirt; + A command-line tool for creating new &vmguest;s using the &libvirt; library. It supports graphical installations via VNC or protocols. Given suitable - command line arguments, virt-install can run + command-line arguments, virt-install can run unattended. This allows for easy automation of guest installs. virt-install is the default installation tool used by the &vmm;. diff --git a/xml/xen_administrating.xml b/xml/xen_administrating.xml index 808a5c1508..d49b2a2e4d 100644 --- a/xml/xen_administrating.xml +++ b/xml/xen_administrating.xml @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ - Pass kernel command line parameters. + Pass kernel command-line parameters. @@ -179,8 +179,8 @@ With &xen; it is possible to migrate a &vmguest; system from one &vmhost; - to another with almost no service interruption. This could be used for - example to move a busy &vmguest; to a &vmhost; that has stronger hardware + to another with almost no service interruption. This could be used, for + example, to move a busy &vmguest; to a &vmhost; that has stronger hardware or is not yet loaded. Or, if a service of a &vmhost; is required, all &vmguest; systems running on this machine can be migrated to other machines to avoid interruption of service. These are only two @@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/sles-15/html/SLES-all/article-virtual NPIV is a special mode to use Fibre channel - disks. However, in this case all migration hosts must be attached + disks. However, in this case, all migration hosts must be attached to the same Fibre channel switch. For more information about NPIV, see . Commonly, this works if the Fibre channel environment supports 4 Gbps or faster @@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/sles-15/html/SLES-all/article-virtual Also display network statistics. Note, that only standard - configurations is displayed. If you use a special configuration + configurations are displayed. If you use a special configuration like a routed network, no network is displayed. @@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/sles-15/html/SLES-all/article-virtual - For more information about xentop see the manual + For more information about xentop, see the manual page man 1 xentop. @@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ xlink:href="https://documentation.suse.com/sles-15/html/SLES-all/article-virtual ip - The command line utility ip may be used to + The command-line utility ip may be used to monitor arbitrary network interfaces. This is especially useful if you have set up a network that is routed or applied a masqueraded network. To monitor a network interface with the name diff --git a/xml/xen_host_network.xml b/xml/xen_host_network.xml index 3d92beb949..627e83832d 100644 --- a/xml/xen_host_network.xml +++ b/xml/xen_host_network.xml @@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ The following configuration only works when using fixed IP addresses. Using DHCP is not practicable with this procedure, because the IP address - must be known to both, the &vmguest; and the &vmhost; system. + must be known to both the &vmguest; and the &vmhost; system. diff --git a/xml/xen_xenstore.xml b/xml/xen_xenstore.xml index 6a25d2dd74..8896ee80ff 100644 --- a/xml/xen_xenstore.xml +++ b/xml/xen_xenstore.xml @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ between &vmguest;s and the management tools running in &dom0;. &vmguest;s and the management tools read and write to &xenstore; to convey configuration information, status updates, and state changes. The - &xenstore; database is managed by &dom0; and supports simple operations + &xenstore; database is managed by &dom0; and supports simple operations, such as reading and writing a key. &vmguest;s and management tools can be notified of any changes in &xenstore; by watching entries of interest. The xenstored daemon is managed by the @@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ vcpu_avail bootloader name - To read a value of an entry, for example the number of virtual CPUs + To read a value of an entry, for example, the number of virtual CPUs dedicated to the &vmguest;, use xenstore-read: &prompt.sudo;xenstore-read /vm/9b30841b-43bc-2af9-2ed3-5a649f466d79-1/vcpus diff --git a/xml/xen_xmtoxl.xml b/xml/xen_xmtoxl.xml index 679cdebed2..6fc421409d 100644 --- a/xml/xen_xmtoxl.xml +++ b/xml/xen_xmtoxl.xml @@ -55,11 +55,11 @@ xm and &libvirt; see the same system state. xend maintains the state for the entire &xen; host. In libxl, client applications such as xl or &libvirt; - must maintain state. Thus domains created with xl or + must maintain state. Thus domains created with xl are not visible or known to other libxl applications such as &libvirt;. Generally, it is discouraged to mix and match libxl applications and is preferred that a single libxl application be used to manage a &xen; host. - In &productname;, we recommend to use &libvirt; to manage &xen; hosts. + In &productname;, we recommend using &libvirt; to manage &xen; hosts. This allows management of the &xen; system through &libvirt; applications such as virt-manager, virt-install, virt-viewer, libguestfs, etc. If xl