diff --git a/P5/Source/Specs/lb.xml b/P5/Source/Specs/lb.xml index f7d88e22d5..b772dbfa38 100644 --- a/P5/Source/Specs/lb.xml +++ b/P5/Source/Specs/lb.xml @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ -

This example shows typographical line beginning within metrical lines, where they occur at different +

This example shows topographical line beginning within metrical lines, where they occur at different places in different editions:

Of Mans First Disobedience, and the Fruit @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
-

This example encodes typographical line beginning as a means of +

This example encodes topographical line beginning as a means of preserving the visual appearance of a title page. The break attribute is used to show that the line beginning does not (as elsewhere) mark the start of a new word.

diff --git a/P5/Source/Specs/line.xml b/P5/Source/Specs/line.xml index e7fb065918..192284ab80 100644 --- a/P5/Source/Specs/line.xml +++ b/P5/Source/Specs/line.xml @@ -21,6 +21,7 @@ +

This example shows topographical lines as a means of preserving the visual appearance of a poem:

@@ -53,7 +54,7 @@ said

This element should be used only to mark up writing which is topographically organized as a series of lines, horizontal or vertical. It should not be used to mark lines of verse (for which use -l) nor to mark linebreaks within text which has been encoded +l) nor to mark line beginnings within text which has been encoded using structural elements such as p (for which use lb).