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Updated Crowdfunding Pitch (markdown)
Remove the now-unneeded "Crowdsourcing campaigns" page.
avatars
The team
"Advanced" ideas in the Budget section.
A few more perks ideas.
Warnings should be questions.
Axe the "challenges" section, quote "1.0" and "2.0."
added missing word
rewrote first three intro paragraphs to be a little more punchy, edits welcome
added budget info
Other ways to help
Refactor "The Team"
The Project -> Project roadmap
link
links
Refactor the description of Buoy based on the Buoy "one-sheet" explainer for NMCADV.
Cut text from intro, rename headings.
Fix image.
More text, wikify existing. Add an image.
Some refactoring, flesh out "request for support" section.
Working on Story for Generosity campaign
outlining more concise version of story
Cut-and-pasted/threw some words at the "Story" section but am struggling with how to organize this. Going to sleep on it and see if I can think any more clearly about the structure tomorrow. A friend w crowdfunding experience suggested the following structure: First describe the problem (i.e. that many people cannot call 911, and there are many situations in which people do not want to call 911 but still need help), then describe our solution and how it can help. This helps set up context and story, doesn't assume audience will just get it at first glance. Will try again tomorrow!!
Suggested tagline
Suggested a title. I think we should stick with just "Buoy" in the title. Adding "Better Angels'" is a bit confusing? We can mention the Better Angels Collective in the description, but I think the title should focus on the pitching the tool itself, not the makers of the tool.