Issue with "Perceived performance": Wording in paragraph is difficult to understand

[itskitto]

MDN URL: https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Learn/Performance/Perceived_performance

What information was incorrect, unhelpful, or incomplete?

Reading through this article, there was a particular sentence that was a bit harder to comprehend. Not something I could easily PR to suggest changes.

Specific section or headline?

The last paragraph of the "Perceived performance" subsection

UI lack or responsiveness and jank both harm perceived performance. Even though a task may take a long time, though, there are ways to make it seem faster. There are several tips to improving perceived performance.

What did you expect to see?

I understand the overall goal of the paragraph but the flow of reading made it difficult on the first pass or even second pass when reading.

Did you test this? If so, how?

N/A

MDN Content page report details

• Folder: en-us/learn/performance/perceived_performance
• MDN URL: https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Learn/Performance/Perceived_performance
• GitHub URL: https://github.com/mdn/content/blob/main/files/en-us/learn/performance/perceived_performance/index.html
• Last commit: b14cfcb
• Document last modified: 2021-01-26T09:06:39.000Z

[hamishwillee]

Thanks. I think the doc is all hard to read. Fixed in #2918