From 7d50c3ffd4df2dc7903f4e41069653a456a9c223 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bartosz Klonowski <70535775+BartoszKlonowski@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 25 Aug 2024 22:32:42 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Emphasize the second problem paragraph with chain of effects
 example (#7108)

* Emphasize the second problem acapit with chain of effects example

* Replace 'One' with 'First' to keep problems counting consistent
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 src/content/learn/you-might-not-need-an-effect.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/content/learn/you-might-not-need-an-effect.md b/src/content/learn/you-might-not-need-an-effect.md
index 66cdc3117..27031720d 100644
--- a/src/content/learn/you-might-not-need-an-effect.md
+++ b/src/content/learn/you-might-not-need-an-effect.md
@@ -408,9 +408,9 @@ function Game() {
 
 There are two problems with this code.
 
-One problem is that it is very inefficient: the component (and its children) have to re-render between each `set` call in the chain. In the example above, in the worst case (`setCard` → render → `setGoldCardCount` → render → `setRound` → render → `setIsGameOver` → render) there are three unnecessary re-renders of the tree below.
+First problem is that it is very inefficient: the component (and its children) have to re-render between each `set` call in the chain. In the example above, in the worst case (`setCard` → render → `setGoldCardCount` → render → `setRound` → render → `setIsGameOver` → render) there are three unnecessary re-renders of the tree below.
 
-Even if it weren't slow, as your code evolves, you will run into cases where the "chain" you wrote doesn't fit the new requirements. Imagine you are adding a way to step through the history of the game moves. You'd do it by updating each state variable to a value from the past. However, setting the `card` state to a value from the past would trigger the Effect chain again and change the data you're showing. Such code is often rigid and fragile.
+The second problem is that even if it weren't slow, as your code evolves, you will run into cases where the "chain" you wrote doesn't fit the new requirements. Imagine you are adding a way to step through the history of the game moves. You'd do it by updating each state variable to a value from the past. However, setting the `card` state to a value from the past would trigger the Effect chain again and change the data you're showing. Such code is often rigid and fragile.
 
 In this case, it's better to calculate what you can during rendering, and adjust the state in the event handler: