From d6625508a269f03833a96263e3e766a8cd0f2006 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
Date: Sat, 22 May 2021 11:30:32 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Fix editorial issues in The Role of Human-Friendly
 Identifiers section.

---
 index.html | 19 ++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 17182b97..f1a18568 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -4456,10 +4456,11 @@ <h2>The Role of Human-Friendly Identifiers</h2>
       <p>
 <a>DIDs</a> achieve global uniqueness without the need for a central
 registration authority. This comes at the cost of human memorability.
-The algorithms capable of generating globally unique identifiers
-produce random strings of characters that have no human meaning (see also
+Algorithms capable of generating globally unique identifiers
+produce random strings of characters that have no human meaning. This
+trade-off is often referred to as
 <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zooko%27s_triangle">Zooko's
-Triangle</a>).
+Triangle</a>.
       </p>
 
       <p>
@@ -4468,14 +4469,14 @@ <h2>The Role of Human-Friendly Identifiers</h2>
 name, a domain name, or a conventional address for a <a>DID controller</a>,
 such as a mobile telephone number, email address, social media username, or
 blog URL. However, the problem of mapping human-friendly identifiers to
-<a>DIDs</a> (and doing so in a way that can be verified and trusted) is
+<a>DIDs</a>, and doing so in a way that can be verified and trusted, is
 outside the scope of this specification.
       </p>
 
       <p>
-Solutions to this problem should be defined in separate specifications that
-reference this specification. It is strongly recommended that such
-specifications carefully consider the:
+Solutions to this problem are defined in separate specifications, such as
+[[?DNS-DID]], that reference this specification. It is strongly recommended that
+such specifications carefully consider the:
       </p>
 
       <ul>
@@ -4489,10 +4490,6 @@ <h2>The Role of Human-Friendly Identifiers</h2>
         </li>
       </ul>
 
-      <p class="note">
-A draft specification for discovering a <a>DID</a> from domain names and email
-addresses using DNS lookups is available at [[?DNS-DID]].
-      </p>
     </section>
 
     <section>

From cebb246ef79cab4021525ee9804494b606ad6f27 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com>
Date: Sat, 29 May 2021 14:48:54 -0400
Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Apply suggestions to Human-Friendly Identifiers section
 from @dlongley.

Co-authored-by: Dave Longley <dlongley@digitalbazaar.com>
---
 index.html | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index f1a18568..7c3f1692 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -4456,7 +4456,7 @@ <h2>The Role of Human-Friendly Identifiers</h2>
       <p>
 <a>DIDs</a> achieve global uniqueness without the need for a central
 registration authority. This comes at the cost of human memorability.
-Algorithms capable of generating globally unique identifiers
+Algorithms capable of generating globally unambiguous identifiers
 produce random strings of characters that have no human meaning. This
 trade-off is often referred to as
 <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zooko%27s_triangle">Zooko's