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-Jesse Wright is a PhD student in Computer Science at the University of Oxford, specializing in decentralized web architectures and artificial intelligence (AI). As a Technical Advisor at Doctelligence, he plays a crucial role in guiding the development of scalable, secure, and efficient decentralized AI solutions, leveraging his extensive experience with decentralized systems.
+Jesse Wright is a PhD student in Computer Science at the University of Oxford, specializing in decentralized web architectures and AI. As a Technical Advisor at Doctelligence, he leverages his extensive experience with decentralized systems to guide the development of scalable, secure, and efficient decentralized AI solutions.
 
-Jesse was appointed by Sir Tim Berners-Lee, the founder of the World Wide Web, to lead the technical development of Solid, an open-source, decentralized web project aimed at providing individuals with full control over their own data. This experience in managing and scaling complex decentralized systems directly informs his work at Doctelligence, where he helps shape the technical infrastructure of the Decentralized Intelligence Network (DIN).
+Appointed by Sir Tim Berners-Lee, founder of the World Wide Web, Jesse leads the technical development of Solid, an open-source decentralized web project designed to give individuals full control over their data. This experience with managing and scaling complex decentralized systems directly informs his work at Doctelligence, where he helps shape the technical infrastructure of the Decentralized Intelligence Network (DIN).
 
-His work in both AI and decentralized systems allows him to seamlessly bridge the gap between these two domains. Jesse’s contributions extend to the Ethical Web and Data Architectures Group (EWADA) at Oxford, where he collaborates with industry leaders on advancing frameworks for decentralized, peer-to-peer networks. This practical experience in building decentralized networks and integrating AI technologies allows him to guide Doctelligence’s mission to develop a decentralized, open-source AI ecosystem.
+Jesse’s work bridges AI and decentralized systems, helping advance frameworks for decentralized, peer-to-peer networks as part of the Ethical Web and Data Architectures Group (EWADA) at Oxford. His expertise in integrating AI technologies with decentralized networks positions him to contribute significantly to Doctelligence’s mission to develop an open-source AI ecosystem.
 
-By leveraging his technical expertise, Jesse ensures that Doctelligence's DIN network remains scalable and capable of meeting the demands of a rapidly evolving decentralized AI landscape. His leadership helps optimize both the architecture and the technical skillsets needed to deliver a high-performance, user-centric system that is both secure and adaptable.
+By leveraging his technical knowledge, Jesse ensures that Doctelligence’s DIN network remains scalable and adaptable to meet the demands of the evolving decentralized AI landscape. His leadership optimizes both the architecture and technical skills needed to deliver a high-performance, user-centric, and secure system.
 
 Learn more about Jesse on his [personal blog](https://blog.jeswr.org/about) or connect with him on [LinkedIn](https://www.linkedin.com/in/jeswr/).