Merge pull request #59 from voicey99/dev

Ike overhaul from voicey99

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/USI_EXP.cfg

@@ -9,9 +9,8 @@
 		// entry just before '//LAST_ENTRY' or with similar entries.
 		//DunaSrfLanded = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = Duna is a great planet to photograph, and the airborne dust renders postprocessing unnecessary.
-		DunaSrfLanded = You try to detach the camera from its mount to take a selfie with your dust sandcastle.
-
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Duna is a great planet to photograph, and the airborne dust renders postprocessing unnecessary.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = You try to detach the camera from its mount to take a selfie with your dust sandcastle.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/atmosphereAnalysis.cfg

@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@
 		//DunaFlyingLow = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaFlyingHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = Lots of carbon dioxide... and not much else. Extremophile plants could potentially live here.
-		DunaSrfLanded = 255. Definitely 255.
-		DunaFlyingLow = The atmosphere appears to be significantly less dense than that of Kerbin.
-		DunaFlyingHigh = Carbon dioxide, with appreciable amounts of argon and nitrogen and traces of oxygen and carbon monoxide are detected through spectroscopic analysis of the local atmosphere.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Lots of carbon dioxide... and not much else. Extremophile plants could potentially live here.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = 255. Definitely 255.
+		//DunaFlyingLow = The atmosphere appears to be significantly less dense than that of Kerbin.
+		//DunaFlyingHigh = Carbon dioxide, with appreciable amounts of argon and nitrogen and traces of oxygen and carbon monoxide are detected through spectroscopic analysis of the local atmosphere.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/barometerScan.cfg

@@ -11,12 +11,18 @@
 		//DunaFlyingLow = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaFlyingHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = Pressure reads: "Gasping for air". You add an addendum about more numbers and less wisecracking.
-		DunaSrfLanded = This data will help to determine the pressure gradient of Duna's atmosphere.
-		DunaSrfLanded = The atmosphere seems to be quite thin here, but it's still preferable to the hard vacuum of space.
-		DunaSrfLanded = There isn't much atmosphere here. You consider lighting candles to create more.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Pressure reads: "Gasping for air". You add an addendum about more numbers and less wisecracking.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = This data will help to determine the pressure gradient of Duna's atmosphere.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The atmosphere seems to be quite thin here, but it's still preferable to the hard vacuum of space.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = There isn't much atmosphere here. You consider lighting candles to create more.
 		DunaFlyingLow = This measurement will provide more information about the composition and pressure gradient of Duna's atmosphere.
-		DunaFlyingLow = Even the barometer isn't sure how to interpret the readings.
+		DunaFlyingLow = Not much pressure, and even less when flying at altitude.
+		DunaFlyingHigh = Even the barometer isn't sure how to interpret the readings.
+		DunaFlyingHigh = There's some gas up here, but not much. What little pressure there is remains far below.
+		DunaInSpaceLow = You're pretty sure this is a vacuum, but given how thin the atmosphere is you can't really be sure.
+		DunaInSpaceLow = You're the one under pressure here, not the barometer. It quite clearly shows.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = The surface all the way down there must surely have more atmosphere than up here.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = There's probably a few atoms out there, but you can't detect them with a simple barometer.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/crewReport.cfg

@@ -13,12 +13,12 @@
 		//DunaInSpaceLow = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaInSpaceHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = It is quite dusty outside.
-		DunaFlyingLow = You really like Duna. It reminds you of chocolate pancakes.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = It is quite dusty outside.
+		//DunaFlyingLow = You really like Duna. It reminds you of chocolate pancakes.
 		DunaFlyingHigh = There seems to be something resembling a face on the surface of a planet, but it's only a play of light and shadow.
+		DunaFlyingHigh = The faint whistle of the the thin air around the capsule is almost relaxing.
 		DunaInSpaceLow = Can it be Kerbiformed?
-		DunaInSpaceHigh = You stare at the planet far beneath you, trying to work out which place would be the most suitable to narrowly avoid exploding on.
-		DunaInSpaceHigh = As you orbit the planet, you pick up what appears to be a TV signal from Kerbin. It's so badly distorted that you can't make neither head nor tail of it.
+		DunaInSpaceLow = As you orbit the planet, you pick up what appears to be a TV signal from Kerbin. It's so badly distorted that you can't make neither head nor tail of it.
 		DunaInSpaceHigh = The crew is concerned that the planet is "too red". Mission Control does not believe this is a good reason to go home.
 		DunaInSpaceHigh = Is it a big tomato?
 		//LAST_ENTRY

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/evaReport.cfg

@@ -13,11 +13,14 @@
 		//DunaInSpaceLow = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaInSpaceHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaFlyingHigh = Luckily the Dunaian atmosphere is very thin. Otherwise you and your craft would get separated very quickly pulling a stunt like this.		
-		DunaSrfLanded = Duna's low gravity would lend itself well to an exciting game of basketball! You consider adding a hoop to your next lander design.
-		DunaSrfLanded = You see red. A LOT of red.
-		DunaSrfLanded = The air is a little thin up here. Down here?
-		DunaSrfLanded = A gust of wind creates a small red dust storm, it's hard to see.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Duna's low gravity would lend itself well to an exciting game of basketball! You consider adding a hoop to your next lander design.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = You see red. A LOT of red.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The air is a little thin up here. Down here?
+		//DunaSrfLanded = A gust of wind creates a small red dust storm, it's hard to see.
+		DunaFlyingHigh = Luckily the Dunaian atmosphere is very thin. Otherwise you and your craft would get separated very quickly pulling a stunt like this.
+		DunaFlyingHigh = Even though the drag force is very low, you feel like you should really get back in.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = No matter which way you look, that big, red eye is always reflected in the corner of your visor.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = You stare at the planet far beneath you, trying to work out which place would be the most suitable to narrowly avoid exploding on.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/gravityScan.cfg

@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@
 		//DunaInSpaceLow = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaInSpaceHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = The gravity is high enough to walk normally but low enough for EVA packs to work like jet-packs. Colonizing here just got a lot more appealing.
-		DunaSrfLanded = The tidal effects of Ike seem to get less and less as you move away from its geostationary spot.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The gravity is high enough to walk normally but low enough for EVA packs to work like jet-packs. Colonizing here just got a lot more appealing.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The tidal effects of Ike seem to get less and less as you move away from its geostationary spot.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/mobileMaterialsLab.cfg

@@ -13,8 +13,16 @@
 		//DunaInSpaceLow = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaInSpaceHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = The samples appear to be permanently red. You consider sending missions in pink EVA suits to reduce cleaning costs.
-		DunaSrfLanded = The samples are slowly turning red. Or is that just your eyesight?
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The samples appear to be permanently red. You consider sending missions in pink EVA suits to reduce cleaning costs.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The samples are slowly turning red. Or is that just your eyesight?
+		DunaFlyingLow = The atmosphere whips most of the samples of the bay immediately. Seems you underestimated it.
+		DunaFlyingLow = There's a fizzling sound as the dust shorts something out in the bay mechanism. It comes back online after a few shakes and presses.
+		DunaFlyingHigh = Some of the lighter samples still shift around in the rushing high-altitude air.
+		DunaFlyingHigh = The upper atmosphere is too rarefied and thin to react with anything other than pushing stuff about.
+		DunaInSpaceLow = A thruster jolt must have disturbed one of the samples, since it's currently all over the wall.
+		DunaInSpaceLow = The samples haven't done much in space, but what they do on the surface must be very interesting.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = The radiation on the journey here has bleached some of the samples, and polymers have turned brittle.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = Normal spacey stuff has happened to the samples. Yes, that's what we call it.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/mysteryGoo.cfg

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 		//DunaInSpaceLow = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaInSpaceHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = The Goo has gotten red dust all over itself.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The Goo has gotten red dust all over itself.
 		DunaFlyingLow = The red color excites The Goo.
 		DunaFlyingHigh = The Goo looks longingly homeward. At least, you think that's what it's doing.
 		DunaInSpaceLow = The Goo has split into lots of little Goos. They appear to be voting on a leader.

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/seismicScan.cfg

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 		// entry just before '//LAST_ENTRY' or with similar entries.
 		//DunaSrfLanded = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = The planet doesn't seem to have much seismic activity.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = The planet doesn't seem to have much seismic activity.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -9,23 +9,17 @@
 		// entry just before '//LAST_ENTRY' or with similar entries.
 		//DunaSrfLanded = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = Different colored rocks are probably made of different stuff. You should grab as many as you can.
-		DunaSrfLanded = It appears this soil could be used for snack production, possibly after several centuries of Kerbal-forming.
-		DunaSrfLanded = This red dust could be iron oxide, or possibly paprika.
-		DunaSrfLanded = You wonder if you need to take a sample considering there is so much dust on you that you could be considered a sample on your own right.
-		DunaSrfLanded = Nope. Not barbecue flavored.
-		DunaSrfLanded = Yup. Dust. Are you surprised?
-		DunaSrfLanded = It's very thin and fine. You imagine a rover could easily become stuck in this if it had small wheels.
-		DunaSrfLanded = This sand works well for drawing pictures on your space suit.
-		DunaSrfLanded = Unable to satisfy your curiosity, you attempt to drill into the rock. It would be much easier if you had a machine to help.
-		DunaSrfLanded = You make a note: "Bring laser next time."
-		DunaSrfLanded = The small rock you pick up seems to be of sedimentary origin. You wonder if there was ever a lake here.
-		DunaSrfLanded = You find a nice metal ruler in the sand! You're ready to proclaim the discovery of an alien civilization, but then you find that the one in your suit is missing.
-		DunaSrfLanded = The rock you've picked up seems to contain a lot of iron oxide III. As such, it's not tasty, nor particularly healthy.
-		DunaSrfLanded = Too bad it's only red spice. It would have been much better to go to Eve.
-		DunaSrfLanded = You pick up a soil sample. It looks a bit like limestone. You consider it important and put it into your sample container.
-		DunaSrfLanded = It looks like some sort of spice.
-		DunaSrfLanded = There appears to be traces of water in the soil!
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Different colored rocks are probably made of different stuff. You should grab as many as you can.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = This red dust could be iron oxide, or possibly paprika.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = You wonder if you need to take a sample considering there is so much dust on you that you could be considered a sample on your own right.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Nope. Not barbecue flavored.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Yup. Dust. Are you surprised?
+		//DunaSrfLanded = This sand works well for drawing pictures on your space suit.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = You make a note: "Bring laser next time."
+		//DunaSrfLanded = You find a nice metal ruler in the sand! You're ready to proclaim the discovery of an alien civilization, but then you find that the one in your suit is missing.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Too bad it's only red spice. It would have been much better to go to Eve.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = It looks like some sort of spice.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = There appears to be traces of water in the soil!
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/default/temperatureScan.cfg

@@ -12,11 +12,14 @@
 		//DunaFlyingHigh = Your science report text here.
 		//DunaInSpaceLow = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLanded = Duna ain't the kind of place to raise your kids; in fact, it's cold as heck. And there's nobody there to raise them, if you did.
-		DunaFlyingLow = It's cold enough as it is, and the wind chill from flying through the air makes it even colder.
+		//DunaSrfLanded = Duna ain't the kind of place to raise your kids; in fact, it's cold as heck. And there's nobody there to raise them, if you did.
+		//DunaFlyingLow = It's cold enough as it is, and the wind chill from flying through the air makes it even colder.
 		DunaFlyingHigh = The temperature rise from the planet's radiation isn't as much as expected. Perhaps the greenhouse effect here is rather weak.
 		DunaFlyingHigh = Turning up the thermostat in your climate controlled suit does little to keep the cold from creeping into your toes.
-		DunaInSpaceLow = The surface below glints white and is covered in craters. The temperature is a comfortable 5 degrees above absolute zero.
+		DunaInSpaceLow = Duna is cold, so thermal back radiation at night is limited. It's definitely there, though.
+		DunaInSpaceLow = You hope the atmosphere provides a bit more insulation at the surface than you get in space.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = As expected, it's cold at Duna's distance from Kerbol. By extension, Duna is cold as well.
+		DunaInSpaceHigh = The gauge on the thermometer sticks, so you give it a few taps. It drops another few degrees.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/highlands/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
 		//DunaSrfLandedHighlands = Your science report text here.
 
 		DunaSrfLandedHighlands = You pick up some loose stones that look to have been part of a landslide.
+		DunaSrfLandedHighlands = The loose mountain rock you've picked up seems to contain a lot of iron (III) oxide. As such, it's not tasty, nor particularly healthy.
 		DunaSrfLandedHighlands = You chip away at the hard basalt with your rock hammer and eventually get a good sample.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/lowlands/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 
 		DunaSrfLandedLowlands = If there is evidence of ancient water here, you ain't finding it. Maybe it's buried too deep.
 		DunaSrfLandedLowlands = Digging down a couple of feet, you hit a rocky surface worn smooth by aeons of erosion by the wind.
+		DunaSrfLandedLowlands = It's very thin and fine. You imagine a rover could easily become stuck in this if it had small wheels.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/midland canyon/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 
 		DunaSrfLandedMidlandCanyon = The dust here contains traces of ice crystals, the concentrations of which increase with depth. You also find a random, perfectly rounded pebble amongst the sand.
 		DunaSrfLandedMidlandCanyon = After an effort to dig a hole, you hit bedrock. It seems to be worn smooth, as if by water rather than dust.
+		DunaSrfLandedMidlandCanyon = The small rock you pick up seems a variety of alluvial congomerate. You wonder if there was ever a river here.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/midlands/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
 
 		DunaSrfLandedMidlands = The exact chemical composition of the surface will no doubt be of interest to the scientists back home.
 		DunaSrfLandedMidlands = The winds that girdle the planet have mixed the local grains with dust from all over the surface.
+		DunaSrfLandedMidlands = It appears this soil could be used for snack production, possibly after several centuries of Kerbal-forming.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/northern basin/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
 		//DunaSrfLandedNorthernBasin = Your science report text here.
 
 		DunaSrfLandedNorthernBasin = The dust grains here are very large, and feel very rough as you scoop them into a container.
+		DunaSrfLandedNorhternBasin = The tough igneous rocks here hamper your attempts to drill a sample. It would be much easier if you had a machine to help.
 		DunaSrfLandedNorthernBasin = The local rocks look like breccia and basalt, and contain evidence of significant shocking and fracturing.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/polar craters/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 		// entry just before '//LAST_ENTRY' or with similar entries.
 		//DunaSrfLandedPolarCraters = Your science report text here.
 
-		DunaSrfLandedPolarCraters = You put a sample of the crustal ice in a tube and put it in your pocket. You take it out again shortly afterwards to see a tubeful of vapour.
+		DunaSrfLandedPolarCraters = You put a sample of the crustal ice in a tube and put it in your pocket. You take it out again shortly afterwards to see a tubeful of vapour bfore the lid pops off in your face.
 		DunaSrfLandedPolarCraters = Collecting a sample of the less dense ice under the crust, you sneak a taste. It's ice all right, if a little off-colour and gritty.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/duna/southern basin/surfaceSample.cfg

@@ -10,6 +10,7 @@
 		//DunaSrfLandedSouthernBasin = Your science report text here.
 
 		DunaSrfLandedSouthernBasin = There's a lot of frozen water in this basin, hidden under a thin layer of dust.
+		DunaSrfLandedSouthernBasin = There's a lighter section among the basalt. It looks a bit like limestone. You consider it important and put some of it into your sample container.
 		DunaSrfLandedSouthernBasin = Nearby rocks look consistent with flood basalts on Kerbin, suggesting this area was once a giant volcano.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/ike/central mountain range/USI_EXP.cfg

@@ -8,6 +8,9 @@
 		// copy-paste and remove '//' to add your entry. Please add your
 		// entry just before '//LAST_ENTRY' or with similar entries.
 		//IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
+
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = You sit patiently with your camera, waiting for Duna to meet the horizon so you can photograph it.
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = Ike provides the perfect stable photography platform to photograph Duna, and its mutual tidal locking allows clear, long-exposure shots.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/ike/central mountain range/USI_SR.cfg

@@ -16,6 +16,8 @@
 		//IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceLowCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceHighCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
+
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = You gaze longingly at Duna overhead and wish you were doing meteorology up there instead of down here.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }
@@ -32,6 +34,8 @@
 		//IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceLowCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceHighCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
+
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = A distinct stream of charged particles can be detected streaming off Duna's atmosphere.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }
@@ -48,6 +52,8 @@
 		//IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceLowCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceHighCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
+
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = The sudden temperature crashes and spikes due to Duna eclipses aren't very good for the materials.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }
@@ -64,6 +70,8 @@
 		//IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceLowCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceHighCentralMountainRange = Your science report text here.
+
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = Some dust has entered the components but, thankfully, this mountain's dust is finer and less sticky.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }

GameData/CrowdSourcedScience/planets/ike/central mountain range/crewReport.cfg

@@ -11,7 +11,8 @@
 		//IkeInSpaceLow = Your science report text here.
 		//IkeInSpaceHigh = Your science report text here.
 
-		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = You feel like there could be life on this tiny rock.
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = You could sit in here forever, watching the dust storms roll across the Dunaian surface far away through the thickened glass.
+		IkeSrfLandedCentralMountainRange = You crane your neck against the window, trying to get a glimpse of Duna.
 		//LAST_ENTRY
 	}
 }