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-In the past 15 years or so LED lights have nearly replaced traditional light bulbs. 
-This is due to a couple of big factors. 
-To start, LED lights use 90% less energy than traditional light bulbs and last 25x longer! By using less energy you reduce your carbon emissions. 
-In most cases, they're the same price as traditional light bulbs so by not buying them you're basically losing money.
-In conclusion, if you haven't invested in LED light bulbs yet they're definitely worthwhile.
+In the past 15 years or so, LED lights have nearly replaced traditional light bulbs due to a few factors. 
+To start, LED lights use 90% less energy than traditional light bulbs and last 25x longer!
+By switching to LED lights, you'd use less energy, which directly corresponds to a reduction in your carbon emissions. 
+In most cases, they're the same price as traditional light bulbs, so by not buying them, you're losing money because traditional light bulbs need to get replaced more often.
+In conclusion, if you haven't invested in LED light bulbs yet, you should definitely look into them; they're worthwhile.
 
 <img src="/images/led_lights.avif" alt="Board of blue LED lights"/>