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Co-authored-by: randyh62 <42045079+randyh62@users.noreply.github.com>

docs/how-to/hip_runtime_api/opengl_interop.rst

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ OpenGL interoperability
 
 The HIP--OpenGL interoperation involves mapping OpenGL resources, such as
 buffers and textures, for HIP access. This mapping process enables HIP to
-utilize these resources directly, bypassing the need for data transfers between
+utilize these resources directly, bypassing the need for costly data transfers between
 the CPU and GPU. This capability is useful in applications that require both
 intensive GPU computation and real-time visualization.
 
@@ -36,20 +36,20 @@ framebuffer in a cycle until the window is not closed.
 .. note::
 
    The more recent recent OpenGL functions loaded with `OpenGL loader <https://github.com/ROCm/rocm-examples/tree/develop/External/glad>`_,
-   as these are not loaded by default on all platforms. The use of custom loader
+   as these are not loaded by default on all platforms. The use of a custom loader
    shown in the following example
 
    .. literalinclude:: ../../tools/example_codes/opengl_interop.hip
       :start-after: // [Sphinx opengl functions load start]
       :end-before: // [Sphinx opengl functions load end]
 
-The OpenGL buffer is imported to HIP using as the following way:
+The OpenGL buffer is imported to HIP in the following way:
 
 .. literalinclude:: ../../tools/example_codes/opengl_interop.hip
    :start-after: // [Sphinx buffer register and get start]
    :end-before: // [Sphinx buffer register and get end]
 
-The imported pointer manipulated in the sinewave kernel as the following way:
+The imported pointer is manipulated in the sinewave kernel as shown in the following example:
 
 .. literalinclude:: ../../tools/example_codes/opengl_interop.hip
    :start-after: /// [Sphinx sinewave kernel start]
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ The imported pointer manipulated in the sinewave kernel as the following way:
    :start-after: // [Sphinx buffer use in kernel start]
    :end-before: // [Sphinx buffer use in kernel end]
 
-The OpenGL buffer is imported to HIP using as the following way:
+The OpenGL buffer is imported to HIP in the following way:
 
 .. literalinclude:: ../../tools/example_codes/opengl_interop.hip
    :start-after: // [Sphinx buffer register and get start]