a little editing and expansion #9
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… expand a few ideas
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Hi Rob! Thanks a lot for this PR! My text often requires some proofreading (to say the least). :) I am rewriting some of this already and will try to incorporate your suggestions/corrections into it. I am expecting to publish next batch next week. Meanwhile, I will keep this PR open. |
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AWESOME! Thanks Rob for all these additions. |
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This change smooths out a few little rough spots to improve clarity and reduce ambiguity. Also fixes a couple minor formatting things in the example code and expands on some ideas in a way that I believe will better express the intended meaning.
@antonbabenko if you're interested in having a collaborator on this find me on twitter.