Adjust English for dev service section

holly-cummins · Oct 23, 2024 · a9b8969 · a9b8969
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@@ -52,11 +52,11 @@ For many libraries, native mode support is the primary motivation for creating a
 Extensions should support Quarkus's unified configuration, by xref:writing-extensions.adoc#configuration[integrating with the Quarkus configuration model].
 The Writing Extensions guide has more guidance on xref:writing-extensions.adoc#how-to-expose-configuration[the Quarkus configuration philosophy].
 
-== Dev service
+== Dev service (if there is an external service)
 
-Dev services are generally relevant for extensions that "connects" to something. i.e. databases for datasources, keycloak instance for security, Apache Kafka instance for kafka, etc.
+Dev services are generally relevant for extensions that "connect" to something, such as. databases for datasources, a keycloak instance for security, an Apache Kafka instance for messaging, etc.
 
-If relevant for your extension, it can provide a Dev Service, use the `DevServicesResultBuildItem` build item. See the xref:extension-writing-dev-service.adoc[Dev Services how-to] for more information.
+To provide a Dev Service, use the `DevServicesResultBuildItem` build item. See the xref:extension-writing-dev-service.adoc[Dev Services how-to] for more information.
 
 == Dev UI