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doc: many grammar fixes to http2.md #17972

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  • make -j4 test (UNIX), or vcbuild test (Windows) passes
  • documentation is changed or added
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_shutdown_ is a noun, but the verb form is _shut down_. "There was a
government shutdown during which the government shut down."
_instance_ was misspelled in the doc. The spelling has been corrected.
Use a dash consistently in _pseudo-header_ (which is also consistent
with RFC 7540). Remove scare-quotes from the term.
Use _is_ rather than _are_ following "each of which".

While "each of which are" might seem equally correct in passing, making
the phrase slightly more explicit makes it clear that _is_ is the
correct choice: "each one of which is".
"have need to" -> "need to"
"a block of...headers are received" -> "a block of...headers is
received". The verb is for the block, not the headers.
"that the listener may used to specify" -> "that the listener may use to
specify"
Fix comma splice. Also clarify if/then construction in previous clause.
"an ServerHttp2Stream" -> "a ServerHttp2Stream"
"applications that supports" -> "applications that support"
Fix comma splice. Also "many modules uses" -> "many modules use".
"allows to support" -> "allows supporting"
"request status, headers and data" -> "request status, headers, and
data"
"acknowledgement" -> "acknowledgment"
@nodejs-github-bot nodejs-github-bot added doc Issues and PRs related to the documentations. http2 Issues or PRs related to the http2 subsystem. labels Jan 4, 2018
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@BridgeAR BridgeAR added fast-track PRs that do not need to wait for 48 hours to land. author ready PRs that have at least one approval, no pending requests for changes, and a CI started. labels Jan 4, 2018
jasnell pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Jan 5, 2018
PR-URL: #17972
Reviewed-By: Weijia Wang <starkwang@126.com>
Reviewed-By: Jon Moss <me@jonathanmoss.me>
Reviewed-By: Evan Lucas <evanlucas@me.com>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <jasnell@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Luigi Pinca <luigipinca@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <cjihrig@gmail.com>
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Landed in 33123b9

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MylesBorins pushed a commit to jasnell/node that referenced this pull request Jan 9, 2018
PR-URL: nodejs#17972
Reviewed-By: Weijia Wang <starkwang@126.com>
Reviewed-By: Jon Moss <me@jonathanmoss.me>
Reviewed-By: Evan Lucas <evanlucas@me.com>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <jasnell@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Luigi Pinca <luigipinca@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <cjihrig@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Ruben Bridgewater <ruben@bridgewater.de>
Reviewed-By: Tobias Nießen <tniessen@tnie.de>
MylesBorins pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Jan 9, 2018
Backport-PR-URL: #18050
PR-URL: #17972
Reviewed-By: Weijia Wang <starkwang@126.com>
Reviewed-By: Jon Moss <me@jonathanmoss.me>
Reviewed-By: Evan Lucas <evanlucas@me.com>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <jasnell@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Luigi Pinca <luigipinca@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <cjihrig@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Ruben Bridgewater <ruben@bridgewater.de>
Reviewed-By: Tobias Nießen <tniessen@tnie.de>
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MylesBorins pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Jan 10, 2018
Backport-PR-URL: #18050
PR-URL: #17972
Reviewed-By: Weijia Wang <starkwang@126.com>
Reviewed-By: Jon Moss <me@jonathanmoss.me>
Reviewed-By: Evan Lucas <evanlucas@me.com>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <jasnell@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Luigi Pinca <luigipinca@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <cjihrig@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Ruben Bridgewater <ruben@bridgewater.de>
Reviewed-By: Tobias Nießen <tniessen@tnie.de>
@TimothyGu TimothyGu removed the author ready PRs that have at least one approval, no pending requests for changes, and a CI started. label Jan 13, 2018
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this doesn't land cleanly on v8.x, please feel free to manually backport

kjin pushed a commit to kjin/node that referenced this pull request May 1, 2018
Backport-PR-URL: nodejs#18050
PR-URL: nodejs#17972
Reviewed-By: Weijia Wang <starkwang@126.com>
Reviewed-By: Jon Moss <me@jonathanmoss.me>
Reviewed-By: Evan Lucas <evanlucas@me.com>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <jasnell@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Luigi Pinca <luigipinca@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <cjihrig@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Ruben Bridgewater <ruben@bridgewater.de>
Reviewed-By: Tobias Nießen <tniessen@tnie.de>
MylesBorins pushed a commit that referenced this pull request May 2, 2018
Backport-PR-URL: #18050
Backport-PR-URL: #20456
PR-URL: #17972
Reviewed-By: Weijia Wang <starkwang@126.com>
Reviewed-By: Jon Moss <me@jonathanmoss.me>
Reviewed-By: Evan Lucas <evanlucas@me.com>
Reviewed-By: James M Snell <jasnell@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Luigi Pinca <luigipinca@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <cjihrig@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Ruben Bridgewater <ruben@bridgewater.de>
Reviewed-By: Tobias Nießen <tniessen@tnie.de>
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