Merge pull request #2836 from truenas/PD-1235

PD-1235: quick copy-edit of intro text

content/SCALE/SCALETutorials/DataProtection/Replication/RemoteReplicationSCALE.md

@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@ keywords:
 
 ## Using Remote Replication
 
-TrueNAS SCALE replication allows users to create one-time or regularly scheduled snapshots of data stored in pools, datasets or zvols on their SCALE system as a way to back up stored data.
-When properly configured and scheduled, remote replication takes take regular snapshots of storage pools or datasets and saves them in the destination location on another system.
+TrueNAS SCALE replication allows users to create one-time or regularly scheduled ZFS snapshots of data stored in pools, datasets or zvols on their SCALE system as a way to back up stored data.
+When properly configured and scheduled, remote replication takes regular snapshots of storage pools or datasets and saves them in the destination location on another system.
 
-Remote replication can occur between your TrueNAS SCALE system and another TrueNAS system (SCALE or CORE) where you want to use to store your replicated snapshots.
+Remote replication occurs between an originating TrueNAS SCALE system and another TrueNAS system (SCALE or CORE) that stores the replicated snapshots.
 
 With the implementation of the **Local Administrator** user and role-based permissions, setting up replication tasks as an admin user has a few differences than with setting up replication tasks when logged in as root.
 Setting up remote replication while logged in as the admin user requires selecting **Use Sudo For ZFS Commands**.