Corrections in the spec language.

w3c · Aug 8, 2019 · 77667b8 · 77667b8
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diff --git a/dist/spec/index.html b/dist/spec/index.html
@@ -1677,8 +1677,8 @@ <h3 class="heading settled" data-level="1.3" id="use-cases"><span class="secno">
     <li data-md>
      <p>An existing web application interacts with the DOM mostly using XSS-safe
 patterns (i.e. withour using <a data-link-type="dfn" href="#injection-sink" id="ref-for-injection-sink">injection sinks</a>). In a few places, however,
-it resorts to using risky patterns like calling into <code>innerHTML</code>, <code>eval</code>, or
-creating <code>javascript:</code> URIs.</p>
+it resorts to using risky patterns like loading additional script using
+JSONP, calling into <code>innerHTML</code> or <code>eval</code>.</p>
      <p>Review finds that those places do not cause XSS (e.g. because
 user-controlled data is not part of the input to those sinks), but it’s
 hard to migrate the application off using these patterns.</p>
@@ -1709,19 +1709,19 @@ <h3 class="heading settled" data-level="2.1" id="injection-sinks"><span class="s
    <p>Examples of injection sinks include:</p>
    <ul>
     <li data-md>
-     <p>Functions that parse &amp; insert HTML strings into the document like <a href="https://www.w3.org/TR/DOM-Parsing/#widl-Element-innerHTML">Element.innerHTML</a> setter</p>
+     <p>Functions that parse &amp; insert HTML strings into the document like <a href="https://www.w3.org/TR/DOM-Parsing/#widl-Element-innerHTML">Element.innerHTML</a> setter,</p>
     <li data-md>
      <p>Setters for <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://dom.spec.whatwg.org/#element" id="ref-for-element">Element</a></code> attributes that accept a URL of the code to load
-like <code class="idl"><a class="idl-code" data-link-type="attribute" href="#dom-htmlscriptelement-src" id="ref-for-dom-htmlscriptelement-src">HTMLScriptElement.src</a></code></p>
+like <code class="idl"><a class="idl-code" data-link-type="attribute" href="#dom-htmlscriptelement-src" id="ref-for-dom-htmlscriptelement-src">HTMLScriptElement.src</a></code>,</p>
     <li data-md>
-     <p>Setters for <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://dom.spec.whatwg.org/#element" id="ref-for-element①">Element</a></code> attributes that accept a code to execute like <code class="idl"><a class="idl-code" data-link-type="attribute" href="#dom-htmlscriptelement-text" id="ref-for-dom-htmlscriptelement-text">HTMLScriptElement.text</a></code></p>
+     <p>Setters for <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://dom.spec.whatwg.org/#element" id="ref-for-element①">Element</a></code> attributes that accept a code to execute like <code class="idl"><a class="idl-code" data-link-type="attribute" href="#dom-htmlscriptelement-text" id="ref-for-dom-htmlscriptelement-text">HTMLScriptElement.text</a></code>,</p>
     <li data-md>
-     <p>Functions that execute code directly like <code>eval</code>.</p>
-    <li data-md>
-     <p>Functions that accept URLs with <code>javascript:</code> scheme</p>
+     <p>Functions that execute code directly like <code>eval</code>,</p>
     <li data-md>
      <p>Functions that create a new same-origin <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="https://dom.spec.whatwg.org/#document" id="ref-for-document">Document</a></code> with caller-controlled
-markup like <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="#dom-domparser-parsefromstring" id="ref-for-dom-domparser-parsefromstring">parseFromString()</a></code>.</p>
+markup like <code class="idl"><a data-link-type="idl" href="#dom-domparser-parsefromstring" id="ref-for-dom-domparser-parsefromstring">parseFromString()</a></code>,</p>
+    <li data-md>
+     <p>Navigation to 'javascript:' URLs.</p>
    </ul>
    <p>An application is vulnerable to DOM XSS if it permits a flow of data from an
 attacker-controlled source and permits that data to reach an injection sink

diff --git a/spec/index.bs b/spec/index.bs
@@ -111,8 +111,8 @@ which are substantially easier to safeguard, monitor and review.
 
 *   An existing web application interacts with the DOM mostly using XSS-safe
     patterns (i.e. withour using [=injection sinks=]). In a few places, however,
-    it resorts to using risky patterns like calling into `innerHTML`, `eval`, or
-    creating `javascript:` URIs.
+    it resorts to using risky patterns like loading additional script using
+    JSONP, calling into `innerHTML` or `eval`.
 
     Review finds that those places do not cause XSS (e.g. because
     user-controlled data is not part of the input to those sinks), but it's
@@ -152,15 +152,15 @@ string value in a way that could result in XSS if that value is untrusted.
 Examples of injection sinks include:
 
   * Functions that parse & insert HTML strings into the document like
-    [[DOM-Parsing#widl-Element-innerHTML|Element.innerHTML]] setter
+    [[DOM-Parsing#widl-Element-innerHTML|Element.innerHTML]] setter,
   * Setters for {{Element}} attributes that accept a URL of the code to load
-    like {{HTMLScriptElement/src!!attribute|HTMLScriptElement.src}}
+    like {{HTMLScriptElement/src!!attribute|HTMLScriptElement.src}},
   * Setters for {{Element}} attributes that accept a code to execute like
-    {{HTMLScriptElement/text!!attribute|HTMLScriptElement.text}}
-  * Functions that execute code directly like `eval`.
-  * Functions that accept URLs with `javascript:` scheme
+    {{HTMLScriptElement/text!!attribute|HTMLScriptElement.text}},
+  * Functions that execute code directly like `eval`,
   * Functions that create a new same-origin {{Document}} with caller-controlled
-    markup like {{DOMParser/parseFromString()}}.
+    markup like {{DOMParser/parseFromString()}},
+  * Navigation to 'javascript:' URLs.
 
 An application is vulnerable to DOM XSS if it permits a flow of data from an
 attacker-controlled source and permits that data to reach an injection sink