Improve post-onboarding: Remove the word "Paid" from the plugin #2672

joemcgill · 2024-11-11T23:41:30Z

Changes proposed in this Pull Request:

Closes #2664.

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Complete onboarding without creating a campaign
Review the CTA in the dashboard for creating a campaign
Create a paid campaign and review the UI when creating a campaign

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Tweak - Remove the word "Paid" from the plugin.

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joemcgill · 2024-11-11T23:45:12Z

This is a quick one to update some UI text based on feedback from @fblascogarma during the review of #2460.

asvinb

LGTM!

mikkamp

Thanks for these changes, I can confirm that those screens now show the updated text.

I noticed that when you click the edit campaign button the following popup is still shown which mentions a paid campaign:

I was also a bit confused about going through the onboarding and creating a campaign. I was expecting to be redirected to the dashboard at the following URL: /wp-admin/admin.php?page=wc-admin&path=%2Fgoogle%2Fdashboard&guide=campaign-creation-success

But instead I was redirected to the product feed tab with the following modal: /wp-admin/admin.php?page=wc-admin&guide=submission-success&path=%2Fgoogle%2Fproduct-feed
Is there another PR where that behaviour was changed intentionally?

For the rest everything looks pretty good, just a few small minor comments about renaming some additional test lines.

I wasn't able to confirm the E2E tests are still passing as it fails with a missing currency in the text. I don't see that being directly related to this PR, but possibly some of the dependent code changed this.

  1) [chromium] › setup-mc/step-4-complete-campaign.test.js:259:5 › Complete your campaign › Set up paid ads › Set up a campaign › Validate budget percent › should see validation error if lower than the 30% 

    Error: Timed out 20000ms waiting for expect(locator).toHaveText(expected)

    Locator: locator('.components-base-control__help')
    Expected string: "Please make sure daily average cost is at least NT$30.00"
    Received string: "Please make sure daily average cost is at least 30.00"

src/Tracking/README.md

mikkamp · 2024-11-12T16:19:22Z

tests/e2e/specs/add-paid-campaigns/add-paid-campaigns.test.js

@@ -280,13 +280,13 @@ test.describe( 'Set up Ads account', () => {
 		} );
 	} );

-	test.describe( 'Create your paid campaign', () => {
+	test.describe( 'Create your campaign', () => {
 		test( 'Continue to create paid ad campaign', async () => {


Since other test descriptions are being updated, we can change this one as well.

Addressed in 4ac7c89

Co-authored-by: Mik <mikkamp@users.noreply.github.com>

joemcgill · 2024-11-12T18:48:03Z

Thanks @mikkamp. I've addressed the two inline suggestions. For your other observations:

I noticed that when you click the edit campaign button the following popup is still shown which mentions a paid campaign:

Good catch. I'm not sure if we want to update the copy for these as well. I'll confirm with @fblascogarma.

I was also a bit confused about going through the onboarding and creating a campaign. I was expecting to be redirected to the dashboard at the following URL

The onboarding flow has ended with the user redirected to the Product Feed tab since at least this commit, so I assume that has been an intentional decision.

I wasn't able to confirm the E2E tests are still passing as it fails with a missing currency in the text. I don't see that being directly related to this PR, but possibly some of the dependent code changed this.

I'm unable to reproduce this E2E test failure. Just to be safe, I triggered another full test run here, which seems to be passing.

eason9487

There are other places that may not be within the campaign creation scope, but have the word "paid", which could be further confirmed.

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Dashboard

Edit Campaign

Can be found with path /wp-admin/admin.php?page=wc-admin&path=%2Fgoogle%2Fdashboard&subpath=%2Fcampaigns%2Fedit&programId=0

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Reports > Products

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fblascogarma · 2024-11-14T17:56:48Z

Good catch @eason9487 ! Yes, please let's remove it from those places too. Thank you!!

joemcgill · 2024-11-14T19:07:29Z

The additional instances of 'paid' have been replaced in the last two commits.

In each case, I've tried to use my best judgement in when it was appropriate to replace the existing text with "Google Ads", "campaign(s)", based on the context in which they are found.

For example, in the EditProgramPromptModal that is shown when editing both Free listings and Google Ads, the existing text was (emphasis mine) "Results typically improve with time with Google’s Free Listing and paid ad campaigns". I've chosen to replace this with "Results typically improve with time with Google’s Free Listing and Google Ads campaigns" to avoid implying that Ad campaigns are also free.

@fblascogarma feel free to review all the changes and suggest any additional tweaks.

eason9487

There are still a few left over but it shouldn't be a need for another round.

google-listings-and-ads/js/src/setup-mc/setup-stepper/skip-button.js

Line 68 in cef1b83

'Skip paid ads creation',

google-listings-and-ads/tests/e2e/utils/pages/setup-mc/step-4-complete-campaign.js

Line 77 in cef1b83

name: 'Skip paid ads creation',

eason9487 · 2024-11-15T10:05:42Z

src/Notes/SetupCampaignTwoWeeks.php

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ protected function set_title_and_content( NoteEntry $note ): void {
 			$note->set_title( __( 'Reach more shoppers with paid listings on Google', 'google-listings-and-ads' ) );


The title has the word "paid" as well.

joemcgill · 2024-11-17T22:17:00Z

Updated based on feedback in #2672 (review) and this edit from @fblascogarma.

Cherry-picked a70da30 in order to E2E Tests and it looks like everything is passing, except for a known issue fixed in #2670.

Remove 'Paid' from ads creation

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github-actions bot added the changelog: update Big changes to something that wasn't broken. label Nov 11, 2024

joemcgill changed the base branch from develop to feature/2460-google-ads-value-prop November 11, 2024 23:42

joemcgill requested review from eason9487 and asvinb and removed request for eason9487 November 11, 2024 23:42

joemcgill marked this pull request as ready for review November 11, 2024 23:43

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joemcgill and others added 2 commits November 12, 2024 11:42

Update E2E test description

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Update src/Tracking/README.md

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Co-authored-by: Mik <mikkamp@users.noreply.github.com>

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eason9487 added changelog: tweak Small change, that isn't actually very important. and removed changelog: update Big changes to something that wasn't broken. labels Nov 13, 2024

joemcgill added 2 commits November 14, 2024 12:49

Remove additional instances of the word 'paid' with Ads

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Copy tweak

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joemcgill and others added 4 commits November 17, 2024 15:36

Results typically improve with time

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Skip ads creation

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Fix the issue that E2E test can't log in to wp-admin.

a70da30

Reach more shoppers with Google Ads

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joemcgill merged commit 98c62a5 into feature/2460-google-ads-value-prop Nov 17, 2024
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eason9487 mentioned this pull request Nov 20, 2024

Feature: Improve post-onboarding #2635

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eason9487 changed the title ~~Remove the word "Paid" from Ads creation flows~~ Consolidate accounts onboarding: Remove the word "Paid" from the plugin Nov 20, 2024

eason9487 changed the title ~~Consolidate accounts onboarding: Remove the word "Paid" from the plugin~~ Improve post-onboarding: Remove the word "Paid" from the plugin Nov 20, 2024

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		@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ protected function set_title_and_content( NoteEntry $note ): void {
		$note->set_title( __( 'Reach more shoppers with paid listings on Google', 'google-listings-and-ads' ) );

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